StyrmanLjungberg
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Joined: 03 Feb 2006
Location: Östersund, Sweden
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Posted: Tue May 22 2007 15:14 Styrisen - Mintpastiller Och Huvudvärk |
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Hey!
Long time ago. Anyways, here's a new track of mine!
Styrisen - Mintpastiller Och Huvudvärk
Title means Mints and headache in swedish |
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Lord_Nighthawk
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Joined: 06 Feb 2007
Location: Germany
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Posted: Wed May 23 2007 06:30
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well, as my asterisk is scorpion i maybe sound a bit harder with my opinion as i want to. but just hard critics help to get forward i think
i really like the melodie from 0-57, restarting at 1:58 till end. the waiting time between this is a bit long until you show what you really want to.
give the drum starting at 1:58 a bit more kick, drum and bassline a bit louder. then it should be more headache and less mints |
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Breaker
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Joined: 12 Feb 2006
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Posted: Thu May 24 2007 17:41
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Real nice melodies there, like the athmosfere a lot!
I agree on boosting the drums, they sound a bit weak now.. Anyway very nice and moodie song |
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StyrmanLjungberg
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Joined: 03 Feb 2006
Location: Östersund, Sweden
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Posted: Tue May 29 2007 17:55
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Thanks for the feedback guys! =) |
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Sunbuster
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Joined: 05 May 2003
Location: Finland
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Posted: Tue May 29 2007 19:10
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Yep, drums should go up. The overall sound is a bit narrow also, a bit too heavy on the high end of frequencies. Sounds as if you've cut away the bass region from most instruments and relied on the bassline to deliver a body to the tune. Unfortunately, it's not strong enough to do that.
Like the atmosphere and melodies of the track though. Overall, I think all it needs is perhaps a new take on the mixing. |
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