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StyrmanLjungberg
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Joined: 03 Feb 2006
Location: Östersund, Sweden
PostPosted: Tue May 22 2007 15:14    
Styrisen - Mintpastiller Och Huvudvärk
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Hey!

Long time ago. Anyways, here's a new track of mine!

Styrisen - Mintpastiller Och Huvudvärk

Title means Mints and headache in swedish Razz
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Lord_Nighthawk
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Joined: 06 Feb 2007
Location: Germany
PostPosted: Wed May 23 2007 06:30    
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well, as my asterisk is scorpion i maybe sound a bit harder with my opinion as i want to. but just hard critics help to get forward i think Wink

i really like the melodie from 0-57, restarting at 1:58 till end. the waiting time between this is a bit long until you show what you really want to.

give the drum starting at 1:58 a bit more kick, drum and bassline a bit louder. then it should be more headache and less mints Wink
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Breaker
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PostPosted: Thu May 24 2007 17:41    
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Real nice melodies there, like the athmosfere a lot!

I agree on boosting the drums, they sound a bit weak now.. Anyway very nice and moodie song Smile
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StyrmanLjungberg
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PostPosted: Tue May 29 2007 17:55    
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Thanks for the feedback guys! =)
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Sunbuster
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PostPosted: Tue May 29 2007 19:10    
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Yep, drums should go up. The overall sound is a bit narrow also, a bit too heavy on the high end of frequencies. Sounds as if you've cut away the bass region from most instruments and relied on the bassline to deliver a body to the tune. Unfortunately, it's not strong enough to do that.

Like the atmosphere and melodies of the track though. Overall, I think all it needs is perhaps a new take on the mixing.
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