G3ronimo
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Nine
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 Posted: Thu Apr 06 2006 23:20
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I like it. It sounds like the beginning of a dance song.
+'ess
Good VST/samples used
Structure
Sounds reconizable yet you develop your own style.
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Percussion (you need a good snare I think)
A bit to slow.. 
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Franklin van Uden
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Posted: Fri Apr 07 2006 10:19
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Not a bad start, i like the bassline.
Maybe some additional hats programming should be in place to get it more groovy (8 LBP !!!!   ) I didn't like the synth/pad that comes in @:42, but that's more a matter of taste i'll guess.
I'll have to agree on NINE about the slowness, maybe crancking up the BPM a bit , and add some fill-ups to the beat will do the trick.
Keep it up, cool start  |
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G3ronimo
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Posted: Fri Apr 07 2006 11:09
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| Franklin van Uden wrote: | Not a bad start, i like the bassline.
Maybe some additional hats programming should be in place to get it more groovy (8 LBP !!!! ) I didn't like the synth/pad that comes in @:42, but that's more a matter of taste i'll guess.
I'll have to agree on NINE about the slowness, maybe crancking up the BPM a bit , and add some fill-ups to the beat will do the trick.
Keep it up, cool start |
hats is a nice idea ^^
(and shut up about the lbp ffs ) |
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bigandymac
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Posted: Fri Apr 07 2006 18:32
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it takes me back to clubbing in 94/95, like acid house/rave (which is good btw).
the bassline is cool but the kick is drowned out by it.
the distortion you used on the lead (z3ta?) is a bit too distorted i think.
all the sections seperately are really good sounding but a bit busy when all stacked up, you could try eq'ing the separate channels.
anyway i think its a really good start and looking forward to the finished product.
cheers
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Franklin van Uden
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Posted: Fri Apr 07 2006 19:36
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[quote="G3ronimo](and shut up about the lbp ffs )[/quote]
It makes it far more dynamic to work in... [Dutch] Eigenwijs mannetje  [/Dutch]
Now go and finish yourself a song , have fun dude ! |
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Franklin van Uden
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Posted: Fri Apr 07 2006 19:37
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| G3ronimo wrote: | | (and shut up about the lbp ffs ) |
It makes it far more dynamic to work in... [Dutch] Eigenwijs mannetje [/Dutch]
Now go and finish yourself a song , have fun dude ![/quote]
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G3ronimo
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Posted: Fri Apr 07 2006 20:34
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| bigandymac wrote: | it takes me back to clubbing in 94/95, like acid house/rave (which is good btw).
the bassline is cool but the kick is drowned out by it.
the distortion you used on the lead (z3ta?) is a bit too distorted i think.
all the sections seperately are really good sounding but a bit busy when all stacked up, you could try eq'ing the separate channels.
anyway i think its a really good start and looking forward to the finished product.
cheers
andy |
no z3ta my man trance pro this time hehe
but there is no distortion in the track 
oh well I'll find a way to fix it
94/95 ... ehm yeah I was 6 then so I don't remember much from the music back then hehe
@ franky [dutch] oudje [/dutch]
thnx for all the constructive critisis, |
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cHiEfRoCkA 4 ReaL
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Posted: Sun Apr 09 2006 23:23
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Well this reminds of the track "Storm".
A trance/techno track from the late 90īs.
The synth that comes in sounds good.
This could be a good club sound if:
-the drums would have more power, phatness...u know what I mean.
-if you put some effects on it
-you (but this is only my opinion) change the bassline, cause thatīs the only thing I donīt like about this song.
Maybe another tough melody or another bass would do.
But this is just what my ears tell me...so you donīt really have to give a damn |
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