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Winter VoyageBy Meelena
Yannick |
Originality: | 8 | Technical: | 8 |
Theme: | 9 | Quality: | 9 |
Arrangement: | 9 | Global: | 9 |
+ Theme, mix
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Sunbuster |
Originality: | 8 | Technical: | 6 |
Theme: | 8 | Quality: | 6 |
Arrangement: | 6 | Global: | 7 |
hmm, a mystic feeling, I do get that winter feeling of it.
I like instr. 2A and the way it's used. Also like the flute playing. Those two instruments are pretty much setting the mood in the beginning of the track. Later on, the piano is nicely creating variation to the track. Also like the subtle submelody played with instr. 03, gives the track a nice twist.
The piano sounds a bit dry, doesn't fit the tune quite. Since you're using the trinity piano, which is a great multisample instrument, I would have used the opportunity to pan it out properly, every sample on a different place, lowest used to the left, highest to the right, everything else evenly distributed inbetween. Then add some reverb on it, not much, just enough to give it a bit more depth.
What's happening in patterns 0E and 0F? very odd shift in the melody, this break in my opinion didn't fit the rest of the tune at all, and it sounded very forced. The kick is a bit low imo. In the beginning it works, but later on when the track is playing at it's peak, it isn't quite audible enough.
I like the hihats in the right channel, nice variation to them. But they could have used a counterpart, perhaps a shaker or similar in the left channel. The track get's a bit right shifted now.
What comes after this break however I like, after this everything has a nice flow, but the ending was very abrupt. I would have used a couple more patterns at least to calm things down a bit.
Overall, a very enjoyable track.
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mindplay |
Originality: | 6 | Technical: | 6 |
Theme: | 7 | Quality: | 5 |
Arrangement: | 6 | Global: | 6 |
Nice melodics, but some sounds are out of tune.
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