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OneDown
By NoGood 
| Originality: | 5 | Theme: | 7 | Arrangement: | 4 |
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| Technical: | 5 | Quality: | 5 | Global: | 6 |
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One Down by yannig van de Wouter.
One Down is a trance track, it has a nice melody but the whole track could use a little polishing.
For example try automation to get some nice filter FX's and try experimenting with the beats for more change in your track, also try putting a drumloop in your music, it realy fills your tracks up.
So Keep on trying! |
| Originality: | 5 | Theme: | 4 | Arrangement: | 4 |
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| Technical: | 4 | Quality: | 5 | Global: | 4 |
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What can I say about this song? One down is the average of averages, I guess. This basic house track suffers from a terrible choice of bassdrum, minimal beats and a average melody which couldn't get me excited. Nothing much happens in the 5.44 minutes this song lasts beside the melody and the beats. Due to unoriginal samples, a lack of good structure, repetitiveness, average melodies and a lack of identifying sounds (fx, speech, beats etc) this song just hasn't got any identity.
To the artist: the melody in this track maybe has some potential, but your song is build up rather bad. The mix isn't okay, your samples are not-original and I miss every sensation of an atmosphere build. Try to add more high frequency, because the whole song sounds like it is played next door.
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| Originality: | 5 | Theme: | 5 | Arrangement: | 5 |
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| Technical: | 5 | Quality: | 6 | Global: | 5 |
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Copyright © 1998-2005 Yannick Delwiche
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