XnmE
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Location: Warsaw, Poland
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Posted: Sat Feb 12 2005 23:33 [new song] Birthday Chillout |
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XnmE presents:
Birthday Chillout (Letter To Aga)
http://lysis.audio-stream.net/xnme/XnmE-Birthday_Chillout.mp3
format: mp3
size: 5,28 mb
genre: chillout
time: 3.59 min
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Last edited by XnmE on Sat Jan 02 2010 14:17; edited 2 times in total |
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Comatose
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Joined: 29 Apr 2004
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Posted: Sun Feb 13 2005 02:04
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Very nice tune XnmE. Love the sparsness of the clean tone guitar. It kinda has a touch of David Gilmour of Pink Floyd to it that compliments the groove of the song rather well. Tastefully done.
Cheers
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Spyros
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Posted: Sun Feb 13 2005 11:47
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hello there here is some really friendly feedback for your track:
1) the drums are very dry. If you want your drums to be like natural drums and not use electronic drums you should use better samples and change the samples during the track..
ex.: the kick is the same sample all the time..(also snare hats ech..) it's really midi sounded drums.. (also do not pan that much your hat no need i think)
2) you should make the pad more complex cause it's getting boaring in the middle of the track... i don't mean mellodies i mean more interesting sound..
3) these voises (aaaaa aa aaa) sound very midi trying to look like natural voise....
3) bass is ok but i would like it to be a bit fatter
4) last but not list i 'm telling you all this cause i also found some nice elements in this one...keep on!!!!
i hope i helped you and you don't hate me!!!  |
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TOffe
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Martin
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Posted: Sun Feb 13 2005 13:23
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Nice tune! Really liked the guitarsound.  |
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XnmE
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Posted: Sun Feb 13 2005 13:38
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Thanx dudes!
Spyros: Thanx for feedback, not for a positive comments
I dont hate you Every constructive comment is appreciated.
1) drums... i've used two different sounds of snare and kick... it could be too little... well, maybe i should put some reverb on snare... missed.
2) pad could make you bored a bit, coz it plays the same chords during whole song, i like its sound, this pad inspired me to write this track
3) this sopran is from SampleTank 2, i think it sounds natural as a sample based thing. But sure, its not perfect.
TOffe: Yes, its Drumkit From Hell. |
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XnmE
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Posted: Sun Feb 13 2005 13:46
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Martin wrote: |
Nice tune! Really liked the guitarsound.
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thanx, some parts - funky ones - are chopped loops, but other guitar parts like solos etc. are tracked. |
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Spyros
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Posted: Sun Feb 13 2005 14:17
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XnmE
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Posted: Sun Feb 13 2005 15:25
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ok two little bugs are fixed now link is not changed. |
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Mephi
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XnmE
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Posted: Sun Feb 13 2005 19:50
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Mephi wrote: |
You might want to put that mp3 up again
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seems like a server is down, try again later |
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XnmE
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darkietheduck
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Posted: Mon Feb 14 2005 18:04
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Congratulations! Very cool tune, like it very much. |
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andrespereyda
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Posted: Thu Feb 17 2005 10:13 I wish mt would record multitrack like... |
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Adobe Audition.
I love mt. But, i want mt to get married to "Cool Edit" (aka Adobe Audition). That's all. Ok? You understand? |
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Spyros
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Posted: Thu Feb 17 2005 14:55
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This is kinda weird...
A girl here??? I thought that this was a gay forum!!! ehhhh
anyway .. I don't get what you mean....???
If you need our "ok" for your marriege....SURE!!!
you have ittttt!!!!!
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