CamBomb
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Joined: 03 Apr 2004
Location: USA, Massachusetts
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Posted: Fri Jan 14 2005 05:39 Music almost as good as chocolate!!! my new tune that is! |
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Well my first completed song...well in a long logn time, i'm thinking of adding vocals. My girlfriend is a pretty good singer so i think i'm gonna hit her up for the vocals instead of myself having to do them. Take a listen and see whatcha think i'm open to any suggestions.
NEWER VERSION-
http://www.cambomb.com/music/DJ_CamBomb_-_Hot_Chocolate(minus_vocals)version3.mp3
Older version-
http://www.cambomb.com/music/DJ_CamBomb_-_Hot_Chocolate(minus_vocals)version2.mp3
Please see which one you like better if you have the time. If not i recemmend the newer.
ahh yes i made this with 2.5 forgot to mention that. |
Last edited by CamBomb on Tue Jan 18 2005 17:10; edited 4 times in total |
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binärpilot
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Joined: 27 Aug 2004
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Posted: Sat Jan 15 2005 14:26
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every new harmony added to the track compliments the existing, good job! i think more work can be done in the initial build-up though, a bit slow in my opinion but then again im no expert when it comes to this genré to say the least.
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Fucking awesome music for ninjas in space and shit |
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CamBomb
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Joined: 03 Apr 2004
Location: USA, Massachusetts
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Posted: Sat Jan 15 2005 18:04
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wow thanks man, i agree totally with the build up, always have trouble with the build ups. I'll keep at it, i'm going to try to add a version with vocals, so this song isn't quite complete. Thanks alot tho  |
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Mephi
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Joined: 22 Nov 2004
Location: oslo, norway
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Posted: Sun Jan 16 2005 03:17
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agree with binärpilot.. you should have some sort of light synth at the start with the kick in the start and some light kick..
(well.. im drunk when im writing this)
all in all.. a good song! |
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CamBomb
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Joined: 03 Apr 2004
Location: USA, Massachusetts
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Posted: Sun Jan 16 2005 07:48
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haha great to hear you're havin a good time. I actually tried something, i added a piano lead in the beginning its pretty peppy now. I agree totally that the first 130 needs some sort of a lead and i figured i'd try out piano...i think it came out good see whatcha think! = ) comments and such are encouraged!
NEWER VERSION-
http://www.cambomb.com/music/DJ_CamBomb_-_Hot_Chocolate(minus_vocals)version3.mp3
Older version-
http://www.cambomb.com/music/DJ_CamBomb_-_Hot_Chocolate(minus_vocals)version2.mp3 |
Last edited by CamBomb on Tue Jan 18 2005 17:10; edited 1 time in total |
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Xylos
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Joined: 17 Jan 2005
Location: Surprise, AZ
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Posted: Mon Jan 17 2005 06:09
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sounds alot better now, the piano really did liven things up. |
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CamBomb
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Posted: Mon Jan 17 2005 18:37
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= ) excellent thanks alot for checking it out again! Was hoping that would help  |
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