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XnmE
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Joined: 04 May 2003
Location: Warsaw, Poland
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 Posted: Fri May 06 2005 18:26
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Sunbuster
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Joined: 05 May 2003
Location: Finland
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Posted: Fri May 06 2005 18:31
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Right, some hopefully constructive feedback. First off, I'm very happy you stayed away from the typical trance strings You've got a pretty interesting melody going also.
However, on a more techical note you have a very cluttered midrange IMO (500Hz~3kHz). I blame a lot of that on your excessive use of reverb. There are too many instruments that have a too distinct reverb.
The whistle sound that runs every now and then (@5:02 for instance) is a bit cheesy IMO. I'd cut back on the usage of that if I were you. It's not needed that often.
But the track had some potential, especially liked the melody, and the layering of submelodies. |
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maxus_pl
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Joined: 01 May 2005
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Posted: Fri May 06 2005 18:46
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thanx, for me mastering in trance is very hard to do, i made many mistakes, but i'm still lernign how to use vst support;)
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Inge
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Joined: 04 May 2003
Location: Nieuw Lekkerland @ Holland
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Posted: Fri May 06 2005 20:09
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Hello Maxus_pl,
Welcome aboard! Indeed an interesting song with somewhat unconventional melodies.
1: Sunbuster is right: the middle region is drowning in vagueness. Try to open up your song and keep things transparent.
2: The drums are somewhat vague. The bassdrum sounds too synthetic. Try using a deeper and lower bassdrum with a distinct sound. The hihats also sound like they have a very low resolution (22 khz?).
Good luck working on the track, and keep us informed.
Inge |
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Walter Vos
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Joined: 04 May 2003
Location: Groningen, The Netherlands
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Posted: Fri May 06 2005 20:21
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wicked stuff man. but indeed, there's seven oceans of midrange going on. the bassdrum isn't that bad i think, i fits the style. the open hihat however really sucks. don't feel like writing much more, gonna watch some tv. keep it up, the song is pretty cool, it's just a bit messy. clean it up and you'll have an excellent song. |
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