Franklin van Uden
Registered User
Joined: 26 Apr 2005
Location: The Netherlands
|
 Posted: Sat Jul 02 2005 16:04
Don't go , second try |
 |
 Another go on "don't go (Yazoo)"
This version is a more housey version.
I have one problem though , i don't seem to get all the vocals perfectly IN beat, though i think it's acceptable (but listen 4 yurself ) ... but ....  does someone out there has a tip or technique to do it the "quick 'n dirty" way 
"Don't go Extreme download" |
Music ... is endless ... Work in progress ...
 |
|
 Back to top |
|
 |
|
|
troy1818
Registered User
Joined: 20 Jan 2005
|
Posted: Sat Jul 09 2005 13:51
|
|
This is what i think.
Drums:
Ok
Bass:
Very corny and lame, should be replaced as fast as possible.
Chorus
The chorus and the vocals do not fit together and they do not sound right. You should try to change the bass and sounds around the vocal so that it doesnt sound false(if that wasnt the intention). |
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Franklin van Uden
Registered User
Joined: 26 Apr 2005
Location: The Netherlands
|
Posted: Sat Jul 09 2005 14:23
|
|
| troy1818 wrote: |
This is what i think.
Drums:
Ok
Bass:
Very corny and lame, should be replaced as fast as possible.
Chorus
The chorus and the vocals do not fit together and they do not sound right. You should try to change the bass and sounds around the vocal so that it doesnt sound false(if that wasnt the intention).
|
Thankx for the feedback troy, it woz one of my first vocal things.
I can sure do something with your feedback ... 
greetz,
Franklin |
Music ... is endless ... Work in progress ...
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Franklin van Uden
Registered User
Joined: 26 Apr 2005
Location: The Netherlands
|
Posted: Fri Jul 29 2005 15:21
PLays on Radio |
|
Hmm however, tomorrow it wil be played on the radio 
Dutch radio , Slam fm , at 14:30 ...
tada
Franklin |
Music ... is endless ... Work in progress ...
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
QBical
Registered User
Joined: 04 May 2003
Location: Utrecht , The Netherlands
|
Posted: Fri Jul 29 2005 18:20
|
|
hmm the vocal is COMPLETELY out of tune... |
PC: P4 HT 3ghz, 1gb ram, 500GB+ Storage, plextor DVD-rw, M-audo Audiophile 2496
Laptop: Apple Powerbook G4 15inch
Other Stuff: Phonic MU802 mixer, Alesis M1 Active Mk2 Monitors, Ipod 2nd gen. 20GB, maxtor firewire HD 80GB |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Franklin van Uden
Registered User
Joined: 26 Apr 2005
Location: The Netherlands
|
Posted: Fri Jul 29 2005 21:27
|
|
| Quote: |
|
hmm the vocal is COMPLETELY out of tune...
|
Thanx for the comment , i will continue with other tracks , and save this in my History folder 
Lesson learned
Franklin |
Music ... is endless ... Work in progress ...
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
QBical
Registered User
Joined: 04 May 2003
Location: Utrecht , The Netherlands
|
Posted: Mon Aug 01 2005 16:30
|
|
hehe don't take it to hard man!
Music making is learning |
PC: P4 HT 3ghz, 1gb ram, 500GB+ Storage, plextor DVD-rw, M-audo Audiophile 2496
Laptop: Apple Powerbook G4 15inch
Other Stuff: Phonic MU802 mixer, Alesis M1 Active Mk2 Monitors, Ipod 2nd gen. 20GB, maxtor firewire HD 80GB |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Franklin van Uden
Registered User
Joined: 26 Apr 2005
Location: The Netherlands
|
Posted: Mon Aug 01 2005 16:47
|
|
LOL 
I won't take it to hard ...
And it sureley is, i learn alot over here, so that's a good thing ...  |
Music ... is endless ... Work in progress ...
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
|
|
Home/News
About
Download
Plugins
Tutorials
Register
Registered Users
Community
Music
Compo
Links
Forum
Don't go , second try
Log in
Profile
FAQ
