StyrmanLjungberg
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Joined: 03 Feb 2006
Location: Östersund, Sweden
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 Posted: Mon May 22 2006 16:43
Need suggestions... |
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I've been workin' on this for a while, but I'm completly stuck!
I just don't know where to take it after this... haha.. any suggestions are welcome.
Also, what do you think of it so far?
http://styrman.madtracker.net/123.mp3 |
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Ravana
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Joined: 18 Nov 2005
Location: Oulu, Finland
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Posted: Mon May 22 2006 16:57
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I think the intro is a bit too long or too short... For me it quite doesn't work like that. Well, I don't know how to continue it, actually, but i have a vision... Of some break with filter automation and after that a bit heavier stuff with a sad melody. Well, that's my solution to everything, I guess, so you might as well listen to better ideas. Sometimes just like a completely new song fits in quite well...
Oh, and just as a hint, tempo-sync rocks... *winks* |
http://www.mikseri.net/artists/thejollynekromanseri.51046.php
http://www.mikseri.net/artists/bewaretheconstruct.62202.php
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G3ronimo
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Joined: 27 Dec 2005
Location: The Netherlands, Wezep
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Posted: Mon May 22 2006 18:22
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really like it  but where the hell is the big bumping basedrum thingy.. it sounds.. ehm.. kinda dead 
I really like the beat though... but it needs some power |
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Martin
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Joined: 05 May 2003
Location: Norway
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Posted: Mon May 22 2006 18:39
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I kinda waited for a bright lead. There was a lot of power in the drums which I liked, perhaps elaborate them even further?? |
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StyrmanLjungberg
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Joined: 03 Feb 2006
Location: Östersund, Sweden
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Posted: Mon May 22 2006 20:42
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Ok, we've got two sides: powerless drums, drums with power  Haha. I'll listen more to it myself and try to decide where I am in the mather.
Hmm.. bright lead, I've been thinking in those directions too. I figured something saxophonish could be cool?
What do you others think about the intro? Lengthwise.
Btw, thanks for the comments! |
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SoulEye
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Joined: 31 Jan 2004
Location: Helsingborg, Sweden!
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Posted: Wed May 24 2006 19:59
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The intro sounds to me like something that should not be an intro, rather an effectful thing in the middle of the song or so.
Second part should have different drums so that the first part's energy isn't lost.
my 2 cents. |
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StyrmanLjungberg
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Joined: 03 Feb 2006
Location: Östersund, Sweden
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Posted: Thu May 25 2006 15:19
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I always use the same drums until the song is done, then I do the drums. I find it easier to fit the drums in then^^ |
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