d-knight21
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 Posted: Mon Jun 26 2006 19:31
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Hello,
After your comments about my first track, I have made a other by taking account of your feedback. And like the other all comments are welcomes 
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d-knight21
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Posted: Wed Jun 28 2006 20:00
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Nobody interested?  |
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Martin
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Posted: Wed Jun 28 2006 20:25
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Hey, I find your track difficult to comment on. I guess it is interesting to listen to and leads me to believe that you put effort into this piece. At the same time there are som elements in it that would be typical of a more inexperienced user.
There is some nice estranged quality to the bassline and the beat which is workin well, but the mood and sentiment of the song escapes me. I guess I would have to listen to more of your music to make up my mind. I would like to hear how other experience this piece... |
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bigandymac
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Location: Leeds UK
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Posted: Wed Jun 28 2006 21:00
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it reminded me a bit of fsol - papua new guinea for some reason. the dubby kick, and the slapback delay on the bass are pretty cool. the percussion also is quite interesting.
the bassline has a few off notes, the mood goes from trippy to early 90s house, and back again. kind of hard to follow.
from a production point of view its quite interesting, and there are some pretty original touches.
the vocal samples seem a little unnecessary, they dont really add much.
i would suggest a more powerful snare, some delay/reverb on the 7th chord, some pads in there, sort out the off notes in the bassline and develop the percussion more through the track.
not bad at all though.
btw, waiting 1/2 an hour for feedback before posting again seems incredibly impatient.
cheers
andy |
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Martin
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Posted: Wed Jun 28 2006 21:04
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btw, waiting 1/2 an hour for feedback before posting again seems incredibly impatient.
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its 2 days and half an hour, Andy |
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bigandymac
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Posted: Wed Jun 28 2006 21:40
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oops oh yeah, my apologies d-knight21. |
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d-knight21
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Posted: Thu Jun 29 2006 12:24
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Thanks for your comments  . Martin, can you explains what kinds of elements are typical of a inexperienced user and how I can to improve these elements?
Bigandymac, I don't understand this: "ome delay/reverb on the 7th chord, some pads in there, sort out the off notes in the bassline". My english isn't very good and the the direction of the sentence escape me . It's can be preferable if I put the track in MT2 format? |
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Martin
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Posted: Thu Jun 29 2006 17:05
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As I said, I find your work rather difficult to comment on, I`ll try to catch your next release and hopefully I`ll find it easier to descripe how I experience your music. I wish I could come up with some better crtitisism, but I really cant. Keep trackin`! |
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-M-o-V-A-J-
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Posted: Thu Jun 29 2006 18:14
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It's can be preferable if I put the track in MT2 format?
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Yeah!! 
It's a good idea to post this track on MT2 format.
Beacause, listening "ogg" "mp3" files, we only can think about the "enviorment sound", and cuality of sounds, but we can't say anything about the use of samples, effects, VST, etc and about the use of the program (madtracker)
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Songs' sounds good, but... please put you mt2 file here.
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d-knight21
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Posted: Tue Jul 04 2006 11:48
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No more comments? |
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