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Amok
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 06 2008 17:19    
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Hi...

Here is my 2nd Track i post here. Its a Remake of an old Gametrack (C64 - Stormlord by Johannes Bjerregaard). Just tried to become familar with the track effects. Helpful hints to improve the effects are welcome... Smile

http://home.arcor.de/sternchen1275/Amok%20-%20Stormlord%20C64%20Remix.mt2

Thx


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Amok
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07 2008 22:04    
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OMG....

It wasnt Jeroen Tel who composed the song, it was Johannes Bjerregaard.... Sorry for that mistake
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Amok
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 13 2008 23:24    
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Excellent Tracker but this community seems to be pretty dead...

No feedback is worse than negative feedback...


http://www.andreasjanke.net
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 14 2008 17:44    
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I check the forum every now and then read everything and post in the thread where I've got something to say. I listened to you track but seeing how it's a remix of a song I've never heard I didn't comment. But I can try to say something now.

Personally I strongly dislike the sound of both Drumatic and Superwave (though superwave can work for pads sometimes). The drums and the arrangement in general are too basic 4/4 for my tastes and the only thing keeping it together is the melody. The sounds for the hihats doesn't fit the style and give a piercing sound and a amateurish feel.

That sounds awfully negative but it's better that I'm honest rigth?


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Amok
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 14 2008 21:15    
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Thanks for your constructive critism.

And even when its negative, it doesnt matter. It will help me to improve. Its the 2nd track i finished with MT (I made some Modules on Amiga 500 about 15 years ago Laughing ) and i fear i will have to read much more negative things until my music get some quality.

I think, that negative feedback is very important. So i can do better next time...

Thank you very much...


http://www.andreasjanke.net
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 14 2008 22:46    
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and I didn't comment cause I no longer use MT (shame on me Razz)


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Amok
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 14 2008 23:08    
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lol... just re-install it... Smile

Heres the ogg-file:

http://home.arcor.de/sternchen1275/Amok%20-%20Stormlord%20C64%20Remix.ogg

normaly the song loops... the ending is a little bit strange at the ogg file...


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Amok
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 15 2008 01:54    
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I dont know if anybody gives a dam but heres the original C64-Tune. !ATTENTION! only for Chiptune-Lovers!!! Laughing

(The part i remixed starts at 0:45)

http://home.arcor.de/sternchen1275/Johannes_Bjerregaard_-_Stormlord_6581.mp3


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