It has got a nice theme, good samples.
The only thing i don't like, is that there is no actual melody standing out.
There is too much support for the melody, and when you think it will arive (around 0:56 -> 1:30), you get another support.
If you had problems finding a melody, try and vary your chords from 0D -> 10, in that way that the support sounds good (which it does), but then you could add a kick-ass melody.
But keep on tracking, coz you'll get there!