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Oh No!
By A-Stay 
Sunbuster
| Originality: | 3 | Theme: | 1 | Arrangement: | 1 | ||||||
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| Technical: | 2 | Quality: | 3 | Global: | 1 | ||||||
| I don't know how to categories this tune. Minimalistic experimental house maybe? To be honest, it get's boring after about 2 minutes. The same things are repeated over and over again. The fact that everything sounds so simple doesn't help much. The transition at 1:25, hmmm... let's just say it was weird, and not very smooth IMO. The end is weird also, very abrupt. Has that "I'll just end it right here" syndrome over it. Instrument 0B could have used some more work, one could hear the loop point pretty well, and with a minor adjustment at both ends it could have been gone (I checked). Instrument 03 is not needed, the same panning effect could have been done by simply using the panning column. Instrument 04 sounds completely missplaced somehow, doesn't fit in at all with the rest of the tune. In general there could be more variation as to which instruments play the lead, it's the same saw-synth throughout the tune now, and that is probably part of the reason it gets boring so quickly. The drumbeat, way to simple, the same loop through the whole song. Even if this was some minimalistic stuff, which I doubt, the drums could use some more variation. Conclusion: If this was one of your first pieces, good, you can almost only get better (my first pieces sucked big time). Just practice and experiment alot, and listen to alot of music. If this tune was about your 20th completed tune in your discography, well, hate to say this but maybe a career change would be in order. | |||||||||||
Daniel
| Originality: | 4 | Theme: | 3 | Arrangement: | 4 | ||||||
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| Technical: | 4 | Quality: | 3 | Global: | 4 | ||||||
| No comments. Please don't submit such tunes. | |||||||||||
Thomas
| Originality: | 3 | Theme: | 3 | Arrangement: | 5 | ||||||
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| Technical: | 3 | Quality: | 5 | Global: | 4 | ||||||
D.Copy
| Originality: | 2 | Theme: | 2 | Arrangement: | 2 | ||||||
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| Technical: | 1 | Quality: | 2 | Global: | 2 | ||||||
| What it this? So wrote five years ago... On 286 and Amiga... MT much more perfect tool, on it is possible to create miracles... | |||||||||||
Netbeat
| Originality: | 1 | Theme: | 1 | Arrangement: | 1 | ||||||
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| Technical: | 1 | Quality: | 1 | Global: | 1 | ||||||
| style: experimental, techno. hmmm, sorry - no comment. | |||||||||||
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