the main thing i want to relay here is panning. it's all over the place. i think that if you equaled out the sounds on either side with a longer pan instead of going from one side to the other like you are being thrown around by two guys bigger than you it would be less abrasive.
now the rest of the track has this dreamy repetitive sound to it that only trance can deliver.
the five hundred and twenty one ways of consciousness sample is great.
overall i liked it but the panning killed it for me.