Elijah
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Posted: Sat Dec 11 2004 19:05 Aximal - JeJe (WarPe Mix by Elijah) |
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hey all
Aximal wanted me to finish a track for him.. i only kept the sine arp at the beginning tho..
have fun.
Aximal - JeJe (WarPe Mix By Elijah) 3.27 MB - 3:34 |
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InHousePussy
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Posted: Sat Dec 11 2004 21:08
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there ain't nothin' there.... or maybe it was my connection that failed..got it now. |
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SoulEye
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Posted: Sat Dec 11 2004 22:35
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Nice, I like it. The drums are really badass, and really the core of this song imho. However, the synth fading in at 1.10 has to go, and the pluck things should have better quality to make it really snappy! Perhaps downmixing the synth and pluck (is it a guitar?) would be a good solution. Either bring them to front or way back.... Feels a bit muddy as it is.
Add some vocal snippet, some sfx to add, and I think you've got a VERY nice piece here! |
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Elijah
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Posted: Sun Dec 12 2004 00:45
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yah.. i wanted to just wanted to finish this..
the pluck is actually my guitar upped an octave, and i put some vstage on it. |
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N0N
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Posted: Sun Dec 12 2004 06:47
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This song is pretty cool, but I'd have to agree on the pluck, althou if you layered an additional clean guitar an octave above whats being played the pluck might turn out great. I hear some really simple 2 note thing, fallowing the pluck but only alternating between the 2 notes every beat,
like,; 1 2 1 2 1 2 1 2,
during 1 2 3 4 1 2 3 4 ect.
The drums are awsome good work on them. |
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Elijah
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Posted: Sun Dec 12 2004 17:55
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N0N wrote: |
I hear some really simple 2 note thing, fallowing the pluck but only alternating between the 2 notes every beat,
like,; 1 2 1 2 1 2 1 2,
during 1 2 3 4 1 2 3 4 ect.
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i dont get it....
i sampled all 4 chords with my mic. ill post the song in a bit. then somebody can remix it if they like.
... it uses a couple vsts. but theyre all free... mainly triangle I |
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N0N
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Posted: Sun Dec 12 2004 20:21
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hehe, oops, I understood it eather way good song. |
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Mephi
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Posted: Tue Dec 14 2004 06:43
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hahah! nice one elijah.. didnt know by loop thingie would end up that way! thats just awesome..
i belive you kept the drumbs and the hihat too?
yes i am Aximal
Edit: btw.. you dont have to name it jeje, cause that was just i name i just wrote cause i just saved it as something.. random |
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Elijah
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Posted: Wed Dec 15 2004 01:34
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Mephi wrote: |
hahah! nice one elijah.. didnt know by loop thingie would end up that way! thats just awesome..
i belive you kept the drumbs and the hihat too?
yes i am Aximal
Edit: btw.. you dont have to name it jeje, cause that was just i name i just wrote cause i just saved it as something.. random
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LOL... well... the song is called JeJe.. lol..
should i re-do those plucks? i can actully sample a better guitar if everybody prefers. |
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Mephi
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Posted: Thu Dec 16 2004 18:50
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well.. if you can sample it better, then go ahead |
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Elijah
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Posted: Fri Dec 17 2004 01:14
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i will.. and it will be normal guitar. i just upped it an octave because i used my laptop SC to record it.; |
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Mephi
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Posted: Fri Dec 17 2004 13:05
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Sure thang!
You might also want some more bass on the bass too.. |
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Elijah
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Posted: Mon Dec 20 2004 01:47 Re: Aximal - JeJe (WarPe Mix by Elijah) |
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Raz
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Posted: Wed Dec 22 2004 20:18
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I agree with the rest, the drums are cool and the song has potential. It sounds good but the guitar and the synth has to be done something about. Keep it up and maybe you have something really cool that people would play over and over.... Keep it up! |
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Elijah
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Posted: Thu Dec 23 2004 01:19
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hmmm.... but i dont wanna! lol..
maybe. ive just started too many things so... |
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