Franklin van Uden
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Posted: Sun Jul 31 2005 23:52 Remixing Yazoo again ! |
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Learned some valuable lessons here, thanx to all the kind and very usefull (some brutal ) feedbacks!
I've remixed "situation" from yazoo. (yup another Yazoo track ) ..
And again, feedback would be very appreciated ...
http://members.home.nl/f.vanuden/mt/Extreme%20Situation.mp3
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QBical
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Posted: Mon Aug 01 2005 16:36
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about the tune of the vocal : Great!
No realy, this is way better then the other track, the only thing I find a bit lacking is the rhythm section. Sure there is lots of stuff happening in the mix but I miss a punch of the kick and an total groove. Maby you can give the kick some more volume and program a simple bass line to go with it ( with this style a simple bass sound on every 2nd 8th note will do wonders! ).
Anywayz, keep up the good work ur surely improving!
Grtz!
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Franklin van Uden
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Posted: Mon Aug 01 2005 16:43
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QBical wrote: |
about the tune of the vocal : Great!
No realy, this is way better then the other track, the only thing I find a bit lacking is the rhythm section. Sure there is lots of stuff happening in the mix but I miss a punch of the kick and an total groove. Maby you can give the kick some more volume and program a simple bass line to go with it ( with this style a simple bass sound on every 2nd 8th note will do wonders! ).
Anywayz, keep up the good work ur surely improving!
Grtz!
Raymond
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Thanx Raymond , i will experiment with your feedback, i've mannaged to get the tune stuff right this time , so the rythm section should be okay in a few ...
greetz,
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Sunbuster
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Posted: Mon Aug 01 2005 23:25
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Yep, definetly a step in the right direction. Like Raymond said, the only thing really missing is a punchy groovy rythmsection. Replacing the sloppy subbass kick (that's what it sounds like at least) with one that has more punch, more going on around 80-120 Hz would probably do a lot already. Keep it up!  |
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Franklin van Uden
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Posted: Wed Aug 10 2005 22:47
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Sunbuster wrote: |
Yep, definetly a step in the right direction. Like Raymond said, the only thing really missing is a punchy groovy rythmsection. Replacing the sloppy subbass kick (that's what it sounds like at least) with one that has more punch, more going on around 80-120 Hz would probably do a lot already. Keep it up!
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Thanx Sunbuster, i will try to change the pitch of the basekick (it's a vst)..
I will also work on the bassline to get some more drive in als raymond adviced .... |
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