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G3ronimo
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Joined: 27 Dec 2005
Location: The Netherlands, Wezep

Posted: Sun Apr 23 2006 18:32 argh where did the inspiration go ><
Okey.. I started this small thingy... but for some reason I can't seem to finnish it >< any advice? http://beta.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=C98FC83C321FD0C2
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Inge
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Joined: 04 May 2003
Location: Nieuw Lekkerland @ Holland

Posted: Sun Apr 23 2006 19:20
With all honousty: put the track on hold. There's seem to be a lack of a clear and impressive main theme, the main melody lacks coherence, and I have a hard time deciding if the bassline and the lead synth fit together.
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Ravana
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Joined: 18 Nov 2005
Location: Oulu, Finland

Posted: Mon Apr 24 2006 17:41

Inge wrote:

...and I have a hard time deciding if the bassline and the lead synth fit together.

I don't. I think you need to change either the lead or the bass. In my opinion the bass should be deeper. Since it's quite fast, why not try adding some jungle/house-like drums... Or something...

http://www.mikseri.net/artists/thejollynekromanseri.51046.php

http://www.mikseri.net/artists/bewaretheconstruct.62202.php

MT source files available if requested (maybe)

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