Frazze
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Joined: 12 Apr 2004
Location: Lund, Sweden
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 Posted: Sun Sep 03 2006 11:34
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Hehe, Mentioned as a top tracker. 
Feedback:
1. Lower bpm a few steps.
2. Trinity piano. Use it instead.
3. Add a little percussion.
4. The song ends and then starts over. That's not good.
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SnowHand
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Joined: 01 Sep 2006
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Posted: Sun Sep 03 2006 13:10
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SoulEye  Thank you very much 
Frazze (yeah I really love your songs )
Thanks for advice. However, I already tried trinity piano, but I need to change some stuffs with this instrument, cause it sounds very bad right now. Well...I'll work on it.
About 4. I already mentionned this, these are just three patterns I didn't know where to put, don't pay attention to them |
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cHiEfRoCkA 4 ReaL
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Joined: 23 May 2005
Location: Germany
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Posted: Tue Sep 05 2006 00:12
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I agree in all points that Frazze said.
Use Vstīs and a slower tempo...you could make a good song cause thereīs potential in composing. |
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