StyrmanLjungberg
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Joined: 03 Feb 2006
Location: Östersund, Sweden
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Posted: Tue Feb 27 2007 19:43 Real Life (Again) |
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'elo!
I recently remade Real Life.
I consider it being final.. maybe some filter on the vocals (as andy adviced.) haven't done that yet though.
Thoughts, comments, flaming. Bring it on!
http://styrman.madtracker.net/Real%20Life.mp3 |
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bigandymac
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Joined: 18 Nov 2004
Location: Leeds UK
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Posted: Wed Feb 28 2007 18:04
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i like it. the tune itself is nice, and the chorus is catchy.
the vocal is a few dB to loud in the mix, in places it takes over completely and you lose the harmony of the bass and melody as a result.
other than that its cool
edit: the organ solo rules!!!!! |
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troy1818
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Joined: 20 Jan 2005
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Posted: Fri Mar 09 2007 23:45
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This tune has much potential. The lyrics some time sounds a little "gnälliga" if put it in swedish. Almost all sounds and samples in this song I think can be pimped up a tad. Something can be added to the lyrics perhaps. And maybe a female voice somewhere could be cool?
The sounds are too wimpy in the sense of power and character, i.e they are plainly boring (except for the organ ofc). The drums can be improved (though not by me), and lyrics can be spiced up.
btw, is this song a little long? I would cut it one minute or so |
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cHiEfRoCkA 4 ReaL
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Joined: 23 May 2005
Location: Germany
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Posted: Sat Mar 10 2007 18:19
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MMhhhhh very nice track .
Loving the melody and the piano!
Vocals are very good too but as Andy said....a few db too loud.
All in all a nice ctahy track u made there . |
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