RoisHh
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Joined: 23 Jul 2003
Location: Germany
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 Posted: Tue Sep 30 2003 10:47
please listen to my first upload... i want some feedback! |
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after a lot of upload-trys, i realy
finished one track and published it
here for you...
please listen to it and give my some
feedback...
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http://roishh.madtracker.net/roishh-transmission.mt2
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thx
Raphael aka RoisHh
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Inge
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Joined: 04 May 2003
Location: Nieuw Lekkerland @ Holland
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Posted: Tue Sep 30 2003 10:59
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The link is not working. I'm more than interested to listen, but this is not going to work  Please edit the link to the working version, and I'll remove my own post for a new start of this thread
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RoisHh
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Joined: 23 Jul 2003
Location: Germany
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Posted: Tue Sep 30 2003 12:45
hi inge, now you can listen !!! |
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so, there was a mistake but now you can listen to my track !!!
thank you...
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CHICAGO¤lollie
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Joined: 05 May 2003
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Posted: Tue Sep 30 2003 13:11
Whoa... Dude! |
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19 megs??!
Whoa...
Methinks I'll have to wait a few days before I can take a listen.
No wonder it took you a few tries to upload it!! |
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vfgdfg
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Joined: 06 Jun 2003
Location: Finland
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Posted: Tue Sep 30 2003 13:46
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Zipping it might have helped.
The file didn't work for me actually. Oh well, going to try download again. |
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RoisHh
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Posted: Tue Sep 30 2003 14:23
19 megs ??? |
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no, if you have it on your desktop, its sized 16 megs !
ziping doesn't help much, so i decidet to
undo...
its a realy great song with a lot of selfmade samples inside. you can listen to the ready mastered version at
http://www.mp3.de/roishh
there you can listen before downloading it!
cu
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vfgdfg
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Posted: Tue Sep 30 2003 14:59
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well, it's 18.5mb on my system (still doesn't work though) and it makes to 11.4mb rarred.
The MP3 is nice though. |
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Inge
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Joined: 04 May 2003
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Posted: Tue Sep 30 2003 15:32
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Review-while-listening-method:
It makes me think a bit about oldschool breakbeat, back in the days of 1992 when breakbeats were still slow and chord progression was irrelevant. I have some difficulties with the samples you put together; it sounds like all the instruments don't want to blend into eachother. Especially some hihats and other percussions fall out of the sound, being too furious and too distinct hearable. I really like the vibrating pad that carries the song, and along with the movie quotes it gives me the impression that you have been inspired a bit by Boards Of Canada. The piano is too cheesy for them (and also for me); you might consider using a less conventional melody instrument that can generate the same effect.
General conclusion: the song has sounds and melodies that I like, but it looks like the final composition is lacking coherence and uniformity. Instead of one distinct theme, multiple variations are used that seem unmixable like oil and water. Consider working from one main theme, and expand from there. Furthermore, listen very carefully to your various instruments and be very critical about if they fit or not. One's ear can adapt to a song very fast (especially when producing), so take a breath, lay down the song for a week, listen it again with a very critical attitude, and work on everything that appears to fall out of place.
Is this harsh? A bit, yes. But posting means accepting feedback, which can go two ways. I hope you understand, and are able to work with the material provided above.
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Sunbuster
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Posted: Tue Sep 30 2003 22:42
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Listening to the mp3 version, I have to agree with Inge on most parts. I'm not so sure about the theme issue though, think there is a pretty clear theme throughout the song. But the piano I'd either change to one with more power in it, or change to some other instrument completely. The crash/cymbal seems a bit harsh compared to the rest of the tune. I'd maybe instead put a soft crash, something that fades in slowly and fades out slowly. The hihats/percussions etc. aren't bad IMO, but on the other hand, I just came home after a 14h work day so my judgement might not be the best  |
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RoisHh
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Posted: Wed Oct 01 2003 08:19
RoisHh |
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Thanx for your re's!!!
mh, now i'll listen to the track in the next
2 weeks... maybe i'll find some things to change
to Inge:
>>> ...but it looks like the final composition is lacking coherence and uniformity... <<<
I don't understand the meaning of!
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cu
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Yannick
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Posted: Wed Oct 01 2003 09:22
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It looks like the file is corrupted. I'm 99% sure that you uploaded as ASCII file while it should have been in binary mode.
Zipping or RARring it would have worked without problem.
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RoisHh
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Posted: Wed Oct 01 2003 13:46
mh... ok thanks |
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i'll up it again as a zip
cu
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Big Mo
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Location: Hoogeveen, The Netherlands
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Posted: Fri Oct 10 2003 15:24
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Whoa... MT completely jams up reading this one... I couldn't even exit anymore, I got about 10 error messages like "Violation d'accès à l'adresse .... dans le module 'MT2.EXE' " I'll try the mp3 version though... |
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CHICAGO¤lollie
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Posted: Fri Oct 10 2003 21:44
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Yeah, I think we've all been getting that message in MT2.
RoisHh, have you--Oh wait, I just saw the date 
I might just go and try downloading it again
edit: Ok, it's not there (zipped version).  |
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