Sonitus
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Joined: 04 May 2003
Location: Gothenburg, Sweden
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 Posted: Mon Nov 17 2003 22:45
Heartbeats-remake |
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I started to dislike my tune "Heartbeats" which I posted here a couple of weeks ago, so I decided to remake it and delete all those damn rhodes and add more strings and chillout atmosphere.
Here's a little [url=http://www.cutetrancegirls.com/other-sites/MyztiQue/Sonitus-triphop(sneek-peek).mp3]sneek-peek[/url] for you guys.
Once again, please give me some feedback and general comments! Thanks!
(A few things to have in mind: I've only worked on this for 1˝ hours. The last pattern is looped 3 times, so yes it gets a bit boring in the end. I know this, so don't mention it  ) |
www.sonitusmusic.com
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Mastema
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Joined: 13 Nov 2003
Location: Soon to be there, but i am here
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Posted: Mon Nov 17 2003 23:47
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i definately like this one better than the other one,
love the voco &string.
The highs don't like my ears too much though
mainly when the strings get louder.
love those little rushed breaks.
and the little bells sounds ramping down are brilliant!
2min. 9sec preview of greatness,
i'd add a female vocal somewhere, all nice and kinda guy sounding but too airy & high to be one.
like oooh's in more places ,then, aaaaaaw's in some places
with an in and out arpeggio, that would make me listen to it all week.
~M~ |
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Sunbuster
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Joined: 05 May 2003
Location: Finland
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Posted: Tue Nov 18 2003 13:51
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I definately like this one  Nice atmosphere, nice samples, nice drumprogramming, nice everything as far as I'm concerned
The suggestion Mastema made (if I understood it correctly), with adding some airy vocal-like wispering sounds here and there could be interesting also. Don't know if it has to be female, although a female vocal is the easiest to get to sound breathy and airy
Anyway, put me on the mailing list for the final version  |
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D Vibe
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Joined: 04 May 2003
Location: Sweden
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Posted: Tue Nov 18 2003 22:08
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Grymt skön!
I really like it!
Keep it up, m8!
/Daniel |
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