Sunbuster
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Location: Finland
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Posted: Sun Feb 08 2004 20:58 Gnejsi - One summer night |
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Evening folks!
Figured it was about time to release something new again, althought a demo
I started this tune in the end of the summer 2003, and during the past months I've been working on it on and off. I'm now at a stage where I want your thoughts on the matter It's a sort of downtempo house/trance tune, chilled with a twist. Made in Madtracker2, additional mix + mastering in Audition 1.0.
the links:
[url=http://www.gnejsi.net/music/demos/gnejsi_osn(64kbps)demo.rar]Gnejsi - One summer night (64kbps)[/url]
[url=http://www.gnejsi.net/music/demos/gnejsi_osn(128kbps)demo.rar]Gnejsi - One summer night (128kbps)[/url]
the rar's include .ogg files, so you know...
So, rape it, praise it, do what you want, just give me some feedback  |
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mikx
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Location: Melbourne
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Posted: Mon Feb 09 2004 11:41
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haha whooo!!! atmospheric machine sounds and ambient pads! sounds like something aphexy, doesn't it?
again, mr sunbuster made some upbeat proggy house thats likeable.. but i'm really missing some deep end. a deeper bassdrum and some more emphasis on the lower end of the frequencies would be great.. i think thats missing from a lot of your tunes .. or maybe i just dont like trance enough (hee hee) ..
the music and atmosphere is great though, and all the sounds fit in together quite well.. skillfull stuff that would make nick warren proud ..
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D Vibe
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Location: Sweden
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Posted: Mon Feb 09 2004 14:37
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Very nice tune indeed! Just wants you to lie down and fall into an atmospheric sleep Great work!
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Sunbuster
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Posted: Mon Feb 09 2004 16:22
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thanks for the comments so far guys
->mikx: the deep end is something I'm still searching for, might try a deeper kick like you suggested (if I can find one)  |
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QBical
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Location: Utrecht , The Netherlands
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Posted: Mon Feb 09 2004 20:21
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Wow, great track! great atmosphere!!!
But I must agree with mikx, the whole rhythm/bass section could be a bit tighter in terms of compression and impact. But only if it is the intention of playing this track to an club audiance.
besides that, great track!
grtz
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Sunbuster
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Posted: Tue Feb 10 2004 15:21
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naah, not targeted to the club audience... for home listening But I'll look into the low end, gave it a second listen after reading your comments and I see where you're coming from. The basskick especially is too harsh, I'll see what changing it to something deeper could do  |
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InHousePussy
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Posted: Wed Feb 11 2004 02:36
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don't be so politicaly correct.... c |
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TOffe
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Posted: Wed Feb 11 2004 18:07
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Sunbuster wrote: |
naah, not targeted to the club audience... for home listening But I'll look into the low end, gave it a second listen after reading your comments and I see where you're coming from. The basskick especially is too harsh, I'll see what changing it to something deeper could do
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I don't agree. With a deeper kick I think the track would sound to trancy. And in my opinion that wouldn't be a good combination. I kinda like the kick like it is right now, in the background and just giving the track that little extra power. But I agree that there should be something more deep in the track, just can't put my finger on what. Maybe a not to destinct deep sub bass that plays a few notes once and a while  |
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Sunbuster
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Posted: Thu Feb 12 2004 14:52
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ok, thank's for all the suggestions guys I guess I'll have it on my HDD for a while longer and see what I think about it in a couple of weeks or so  |
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