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Sonitus
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Joined: 04 May 2003
Location: Gothenburg, Sweden
PostPosted: Mon Nov 17 2003 22:45    
Heartbeats-remake
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I started to dislike my tune "Heartbeats" which I posted here a couple of weeks ago, so I decided to remake it and delete all those damn rhodes and add more strings and chillout atmosphere.

Here's a little [url=http://www.cutetrancegirls.com/other-sites/MyztiQue/Sonitus-triphop(sneek-peek).mp3]sneek-peek[/url] for you guys.

Once again, please give me some feedback and general comments! Thanks!

(A few things to have in mind: I've only worked on this for 1˝ hours. The last pattern is looped 3 times, so yes it gets a bit boring in the end. I know this, so don't mention it Smile)


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Mastema
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Joined: 13 Nov 2003
Location: Soon to be there, but i am here
PostPosted: Mon Nov 17 2003 23:47    
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i definately like this one better than the other one,
love the voco &string.
The highs don't like my ears too much though
mainly when the strings get louder.
love those little rushed breaks.
and the little bells sounds ramping down are brilliant!

2min. 9sec preview of greatness,

i'd add a female vocal somewhere, all nice and kinda guy sounding but too airy & high to be one.

like oooh's in more places ,then, aaaaaaw's in some places

with an in and out arpeggio, that would make me listen to it all week.

~M~
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Sunbuster
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Joined: 05 May 2003
Location: Finland
PostPosted: Tue Nov 18 2003 13:51    
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I definately like this one Shocked Nice atmosphere, nice samples, nice drumprogramming, nice everything as far as I'm concerned Smile

The suggestion Mastema made (if I understood it correctly), with adding some airy vocal-like wispering sounds here and there could be interesting also. Don't know if it has to be female, although a female vocal is the easiest to get to sound breathy and airy Smile

Anyway, put me on the mailing list for the final version Wink
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D Vibe
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 18 2003 22:08    
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Grymt skön!

I really like it!

Keep it up, m8!

/Daniel


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