JayBaller10
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Amok
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 Posted: Sat Feb 02 2008 22:22
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+ Arrangement & Quality good
- VERY repetitive... |
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JayBaller10
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Posted: Sat Feb 02 2008 22:36
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Thanks for the critique Amok - need more people like you responding. I know the Soft brass ensemble seems to be repetitive, but that's how the music in this genre (rap) is, haha. It wouldn't be as noticeable of course if it had lyrics behind it... |
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Amok
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Posted: Sat Feb 02 2008 22:50
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okay. with some vocals it could work maybe. but the i miss a refrain somehow...
BTW: feel free to comment my tracks too...  |
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Frazze
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Posted: Sun Feb 03 2008 00:14
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| Amok wrote: |
+ Arrangement & Quality good
- VERY repetitive...
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Yeah that pretty much sums it up. Also what is up with that sine floating around the place? It seems to be in tune only sometimes. The harpsichords second phrase doesn't fit with the minimal melodies of the rest.
I like the bass, brass and hits. Real cool. But I think you could put more variation in there even if it's hip hop. |
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JayBaller10
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Posted: Sun Feb 03 2008 01:02
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Okay, will take a break from listening to it, come back and see what I can change up. Thanks for listening and critiquing. |
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Amok
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Posted: Sun Feb 03 2008 01:17
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Take it easy...
When i heard the "Intro" i thougt: "GREAT TRACK!"
i was waiting for something but nothing happened. i think you have great potential. but like frazze said, the track needs some variation to make it real good... |
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